Hello and welcome to March flash fiction. This is where we write a story based on an image sent to us by Jessica J and Bronwyn. This month our pic is really cool. Check it:
Here's my piece. I hope you like it.
The Orb
Tara
held up the shimmering, multicolored orb and stared into its depths. The thing
was amazing. It almost reminded her of something created from ice and stuffed
with lights that she’d once seen at a winter carnival. This was no temporary holiday
decoration though. The crystal ball was solid and cool to the touch. She
rotated the piece in her hands trying to figure out how the artist had made it glow.
She couldn’t see an opening for batteries and it certainly didn’t contain
lights so how was it lit?
She
looked around the junk shop she’d wandered into, but couldn’t find anyone to
ask. Just as well, since the piece had to be well outside her price. Still, it
wouldn’t hurt to enquire since it might be
one of a hundred pieces they sold to gullible tourists for cheap. She doubted
it though. She’d priced crystal balls before and they were expensive. None,
though was as amazing as the ball she held.
Traveling
for work was a pain, but she always tried to see some of the city. Usually,
that meant, going to unique spots like antique shops. She never went to the
high-end places, since they just didn’t have personality. She gravitated more
toward the junk end of the spectrum. She loved the things they packed in since
she could usually find a treasure. The orb was a treasure. She really hoped it
wasn’t too expensive.
Staring
into its shining depths, she tried to discern where the glow came from.
What’s your wish?
She
looked around. Had someone spoken? She didn’t see anyone near. In fact, there
wasn’t anyone in the shop at all.
What’s your wish?
What?
She peeked around a corner. Nothing. Okay, the where was the voice coming from?
She searched around until she saw a grate in the wall. There it was. She was
probably hearing a conversation in the next room or building. She laughed to
herself, feeling better to have figured it out.
She
stared back at the orb. Were the colors brighter?
What’s your wish?
She
stared into the ball. She didn’t care if the question was truly directed at
her. It was too delicious not to think about. What if someone or something
could grant wishes? What would she want?
“I’d
wish,” she whispered softly, her breath gently brushing against the crystal
ball, “for a wonder adventure. I’d wish for a wonderful adventure where I’d
find an amazing man who would love me, all of me, for who I am and who I could
love back. Oh, and if we’re going all the way, he’d be like so amazing looking
and we’d have really stellar sex.”
She
burst out laughing and hugged the orb close to her chest. Yeah, and with the
wish and a quarter she might get gum from a machine. Maybe.
Wish granted.
The
orb began to flicker brightly as colors slid over and around the surface. Tara
held it up, dismayed. Hell, had she broken it? She hoped not. The piece began
to heat up in her hands and she tried to set it down. For some reason, her
fingers wouldn’t let go. No matter what she did, she clasped it tighter as the
ball became brighter and brighter.
Colors
swirled out until she was surrounded. Tara opened her mouth to scream, but in a
second, she and the orb vanished.
Now go and check out the other flash fiction posts!
See you all on Wednesday!! --Gwen
"Oh, and if we’re going all the way, he’d be like so amazing looking and we’d have really stellar sex.” This line made me laugh. So many people forget the important details in wishes!
ReplyDeleteExactly!!!!! You have to include the details or who knows what you'll get. ;-)
DeleteNow, I want to know where she went. I sure hope sh's off to get her wishes, but...but...
ReplyDeleteGreat job. You definitely hooked me.
THAT IS SERIOUSLY WHERE YOU LEAVE US... WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? THAT ISN'T ENOUGH. Fresh (you can ask Jess about that one). Well done.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the super specific wish - good job! :)
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